After recieving my feedback from my teacher's it seems there's a lot of work still to be done. I've been advised to try and get hold of some other model's that perhaps look slightly older, as currently my models look a little bit to young for my magazine. I've been given some ideas about who I could use, and I think i'll use the people suggested. This might mean i'll have to slightly change the image of my band, however they can still have the same personality's and music genre that my previous models had.
A worry of mine is how I'm going to get them to dress, as it may be a bit of a challenge, I will also need to possibly find a third model. I may use one of my previous models, Miles, however he may look even younger when stood next to my new models so that may be a bad idea.
I need to improve my front cover drastically, as at the minute it's not good enough and like I had feared needs improving. Before I can start to improve it I will need to retake my pictures as i'll need to work my front cover around the picture.
My contents needs a bit of improving, this shouldn't be too tricky, at the minute, I think i'll keep the picture in the same place, so it'll be a question of photoshopping that in. I may change my columns about and try to fill the page a bit more and make it more interesting and to fill it up.
My double page spread will stay virtually the same, it'll just be a change of pictures and I may have to get rid of some of the article as at the minute it's proving a lot to fit in and it's having to be put in a small font, which could be an issue for some readers.
I feel that once all of my changes have been made my magazine will be better for it, it might just prove a challenge to get models that have the look I want, and especially to find 3 of them at a similar age.
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